And I see sand.
Barren ground like,
Hearts grown blind to evidence.
Now, open up your eyes.
And the end does draw nearer,
But I am just beginning.
Unfold your mind.
The brushed metal from this rail.
Home to your oil.
Stain and stain and stain and stain.
Where have you gone?
There's no set destination.
Except an answer.
Look around you.
There's simply no-one at all.
Evidence staring at you.
And you staring at green lands.
6 comments:
Tis lil old me once more:P!
I think you're going to have to block all my comments to keep me away from this blog!
;)!
You know something weird - I wrote a poem called The Train a week ago!
"I looked ahead - I found an empty seat,
I looked to my right - I found an empty seat,
I looked to my left - I found a companion.
A silent glass window to my left,
It showed me another one.
It went faster than my empty rail,
It was filled with life - something mine was devoid of.
Alone i watched."
That was just an excerpt from mine.. It's too long to write here.
And of course, it's absoulte rubbish compared to your masterpiece!
Nishant!! How do you do it??!!!
BRAVO! Once again!
:D!
Emotions definately transcend
drowning ;)
- kapila
Emotions definately transcend.
drowning ;)
- kapila
NISHANT!!!!
Like shalaka said, this is amazing!
I never knew you write sooo weelll!!!!
Wow!!
You should start sending them as articles. Im not jokin!! Take your work seriously and definitely try to send these to magazines.
Your poetry makes a mark on i think everyones life especially those of our age...
Once again, i want to tell u how ammaaazinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn ur poetry is!!!
nd...i loved alll of them...nd its very very tough to choose the best...
i understand shalaka'z comment addiction for this blog.
i think this is THE best blog i have read till now...
you have one amazing talent...keep it up! and pleease do post more! :D
YOU LOSER !! Where's my previous comment :@ :@ ? OKAY .. My comment made some sense you totally shud've posted it okayyy !!
Hey hey !! BTWWW .. Where's my poem ? =)
wow..!..Amazin..One of the poems i really enjoyed..
Keep Bloggin!
Amazin!
-Trishu:D;)
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