Thursday, February 22, 2007

Courage?

A footstop falls.
Breaking the silence.
Shattering the signature of secrets.

And ever-dwindling is the present,
Ever-remembered the past.
The future, ever-uncertain,
But the arduous struggle onwards rages on.

Sound. A belonging. A longing.
Sight. A longing. A need.
Hurt. A pain. A must.
Growth. A must. A need.

We're all afraid of what we don't understand.
Yet there's always an explanation.
And to conquer,
On we ride.

And to achieve,
On we ride.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nishhhhh..
Ok wow.. I seriously had no idea you could write so well ..
Your poems are really, really nice.
Well, I don't really DO poetry, but either way..
Aight well, thats kinda all =)

Shalaka said...

Hello!!

"Sound. A belonging. A longing.
Sight. A longing. A need.
Hurt. A pain. A must.
Growth. A must. A need."

The whole poem was absolutely AMAZING but those 4 lines were just so true and so beautifully put!

You are definitely going to get published one day:D!

I LOVE THIS BLOG!

Anonymous said...

amazing...i dint know u could write like that..keep it goin!!

Anonymous said...

Okay, I'm really impressed!
You've got a way with words and your writing style's unique, a blend of old-y world-y (couldn't with of another way of putting it :S) and contemporary.
Keep it up! :D

Anonymous said...

I always knew u cud ryte..:D..N thts 1 thing im still JEALOUS of till 2day..:'(
I luv this 1..
Amazin!!
Keep writin..
-Trisha(3sha)

Unknown said...

Hey! Awesome blog! How do u rite so well???? And c i commented!! :D