Tuesday, April 10, 2007

Well?

Importunation, now evaluation.
For the better.
In the midst of day's musk,
We muse; judge our character.
And right wrongs.

We ascend our self-grafted destruction;
To place our heads in their arms.
So they may bestow upon us their ingratitude,
And shield us from fleeting charms.

But still I breathe no air,
Because I have breathed too much.
And I march onwards.
I march onwards to such.

Will I die?

2 comments:

Rhea said...

'Importunation' - Love that word! =D
Hmm.. you usually don't rhyme in your poems but it works here.
Also, nice title.
Glad you've updated!
BLOG ON!

Shalaka said...

I'm sorry I'm late:P.

Well, I didn't know what importunation meant so I checked it out and THEN I actually understood:D. YOU UPDATED!! :D!

I thought it was really good. Ya, the rhyming thing was pretty unusual (for you) but I thought it suited the poem 'well' (excuse the hideous pun:P)!!

Keep updating one of my all-time favortie blogs:D!

PS : You didn't tell me. How's the practise going now?